Hutchinson School and its Big Vote
PELHAM, NY– Hutchinson school needs its outside bricks, windows and roof replaced! Hutchinson school has been around for about 100 years. People are voting if we should fix the school or rebuild the school. But rebuilding the school will be about 34,000,000 dollars! But I will still vote for rebuilding the school because we also need some extra space.
MR shared, “It’s a good school.”
CM said, “I think that Hutchinson needs to be rebuilt because the outside is falling apart.” Great answer if she was going to vote, but she’s too young. She has to be at least 18 years old, and she’s only 8.
SG commented, “I love Hutchinson School. It’s a great school.”
I think we all have voted for rebuilding the school. If that wins, I hope you be kind and give some money!
I think we should rebuild the school so we can have elevators for the people who can’t get around very well, and we can put some air conditioners in because the school gets hot, especially during the summer! We also could use some in the gym because when we are running around and playing games, we get hot. So that is a good suggestion!
If we do win and earn all that money, we can rebuild it! But it will take a long time and taking down the school can be dangerous.
Lila Carpenter • Jan 14, 2018 at 4:09 pm
Maybe we should just fix it because rebuilding it is a lot of money, and I wouldn’t give away THAT much money from just my family! We have a lot of money, but if we send that much money, then my family will be poor! So I would fix it, but then the whole school COULD fall down, and we would have to go to another school while it was being rebuilt. But then all the schools would have to much students!
If we rebuild it, they will build it someplace else while all the Hutchinson students are in the first school, and when they’re done, we go there and they knock the old one down. It won’t be dangerous for people except them because they are good at their job, and it won’t make that much noise.
So I changed my mind again back to rebuilding it, because I explained both things and rebuilding it sounds the best of the two. I hope you understand and vote for rebuilding the school! Or if you have a better plan, send the plan to me and I’ll figure it out.
Thanks for reading this so patiently and I’ll see you again soon! And I know I wrote a lot! I do have a talent for writing because my mom is a writer!
Lucy Ow • Jan 13, 2018 at 10:44 am
Nice story! Maybe Hutch should just be remodeled, not rebuilt. I think this because everything is changing, and a new school is just too much change! Hutchinson School is a wonderful place!
You wrote so much on this story!
I can tell you worked hard!
From, LO, Staff Reporter
Mrs Tarazi • Jan 12, 2018 at 9:55 pm
Terrific article! I love your writing. You included some very important points, especially about the air conditioners. I agree with you!
Kristin King • Jan 11, 2018 at 9:16 pm
What an excellent article! So many valid points are presented.
I will happily contribute if the fund-raising option wins!
This young writer shows wonderful journalism potential!